J. Wilder

I really like this. I'm actually planning on probably moving to Glasgow, so it was cool to read something set there. Anyway the character seems interesting and easy enough to ...

I like it. It's interesting and doesn't seem cliche yet (although end-of-the-world stories have a possibility of being that way). The character seems realistic and likable so far. The only ...

I like it, but you switch back and forth between tenses--choose one. Also there are a couple typos. But it's interesting and I like the voice of the character. Post ...

Is this the beginning of a story/novel or the middle? The description of the bar was pretty good, but there were some grammatical errors and stuff, which I've tried to ...

I really like the way this is written. I like the transitions between the different sections and I like the beginning part about the glass house. So I think it's ...

I'm going to one tomorrow night. If you want I can tell you what it's like.

They're still definitely around. This one night back when I was living in California I was hanging out drinking with some people at Long Beach State and a few of ...

"Nice to meet you, Zoe and Laila," says Anthony. "Yeah, nice to meet you." Jake receives the 7&7 and takes a couple of large gulps.

The taller guy turns to the bar again and orders a 7 & 7. "I'm Jake," he says to the blonde girl. The darker-haired guy introduces himself as Anthony.

"Nah, first time here," says the blond guy. "Do you?"

"Hey," says the tall guy, his attention turning completely to the younger girl. "Hi." The shorter guy's smile gets wider.

His smile gives way to his naturally serious expression, one of the things that differentiates him from his friend, whose wide smile has rarely wavered. "What's your name?" he adds, ...

He smiles. "It's okay. I certainly know what you mean."

Meanwhile, the brown-haired boy returns to the bar. "Nevermind. I just talked to Adriana on the phone. They're not even here yet," he says to the guy drinking the Zombie. ...